Thread:BowserRulesAll/@comment-27033016-20190622145050/@comment-27033016-20190707024717

Alright, so my story is an original novel that's still in progress. I haven't came up for a title yet, but the premise is that a young woman named Alice wakes up to find her father gone, and desperately wants to search for him. On the way, she meets a woman named Naomi who saves her from a gang of trench coat mobsters called the Diamondback Agents, and together, they get into a conflict with them while searching for the whereabouts of Alice's father. However, Naomi would soon find out that Alice is not an ordinary human, and has connections with an old legend that was passed down through generations called "The Clock Man and the Twelve Clockwork Sisters".

Alice: The main protagonist of the story. Alice is actually a sentient clockwork doll who can feel emotion and think independently, and is the 2nd of the Clockwork Sisters. Her main goal is to reunite with her father, whom had gone missing for an unknown amount of time. Very kind and reserved, she is far from weak though, as she possesses the power to manipulate time on a small local scale. She can conjure up a sword that can cut through someone's individual "time" and can fly using hidden clockwork wings. Named after the titular Alice from Alice in Wonderland.

Naomi L: A young woman whom Alice encounters when she saves her from the Diamondback Agents. She used to be a student studying in the town of Belton until the mobsters took it over, and now she fights them in a revolution to take back the town. Very strong-willed and determined, her motivation is to protect the innocent people from the Diamondbacks. She wields two magnum revolvers and mainly uses them to incapacitate her targets as she's reluctant to kill anyone. She has a hidden background that she refuses to bring up as it brings horrible memories of her past.

Aaron Desmond: A young man who is the manager of the Windy Hexagon tavern in Belton. He's a very cunning and laid back individual who fights the Diamondbacks alongside Naomi, and is very intelligent. He knows close-quarters combat and gets up close and personal with his fists, and unlike Naomi, is willing to kill if he's pushed hard enough. He's the type of person who doesn't take bullshit from anyone, and will use whatever he can find to use against his enemies. He owns a pet falcon named Enceledus who acts as a messenger, carrier, and battle partner, and many of his combat techniques are named after aspects of Saturn.

Cosette: The 3rd of the Clockwork Sisters who Alice has a close relationship to. She was originally found in the rural farmlands far away from Belton and being abused by a corrupt land owner who sees her as "just a piece of junk". After being rescued, she accompanies Alice on her journey to search for their missing father. She also possesses the ability to manipulate time on a small local scale and can see individual people's memories. She wields a staff in battle of which, she can conjure up some magic spells with. Named after Cosette from Les Misérables.

Hiroshi Takashi: A member of the Moriya guild who's in a constant war against the rival Shining Needle guild. A seemingly average teenage Japanese male who's been jokingly called "The Isekai Warrior" due to the fact that he exhibits many traits of isekai protagonists from light novels, he pushes through battle regardless of his circumstances, and wishes for the two warring guilds to make peace with one another. He wields two swords in battle, not unlike a certain isekai protagonist. However, he is more of a deconstruction of isekai protags in general, as his reckless behavior tends to get him injured a lot in battle. His goal is to find the legendary Clockwork Sisters of legend to hopefully put an end to the war, and his faithful encounter with Alice's group turns his life upside down.

These are the main characters of my story. So, what do you think?